Filled with dobt
my black and blue daisy petals
fall to the ground
he loves me
he loves me not
loves longing is like a splash of water
in a 10 year drought
looking in the mirror
it hurts to see
the painted on smile
everyones made to see
but whats that feeling creeping
and crawling with in
cracking the porcelain
giving new texture
tuffing the skin
maybe anger
or agony
or just plain shame
bliss has never been a friend of mine
hoping my blue and black petals
fade with time
i'm spittin' up daisys
so over filled
that reflection in the mirror, is a window but a door a dare not walk through.....

by: me
i don't even know what to say...it's ummm...idk...hehe :)
hope ya'll like it

You will be the singer of my death metal band yes it rocks that hard

Hehe...:D

I dont think i'm that good...

@alysia92: yes you are if billy corgan fronted slayer these are the lyrics he would sing

It is very good.

Wow, really??? :))) ....thanx ya'll

Whos billy corgan???

@alysia92: Your work is probably the best I've seen around here so far. I know it's hard to feel confident about your writing sometimes, but you actually are good. I hope you don't ever stop writing, and keep working to make yourself even better. Believe in your work! Its worthy :) Good luck to ya. And thanks for sharing with us.

@alynn: Thank u :) will do