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Someones Memory (by JtWhite)

 JtWhite 
6-Nov-12 9:29 pm
I'm not inhuman
I'm not alive
I walk the road
thats in the sky
I am your conscience
I live inside your mind
I see tomorrow
looking through your eyes
I'm there in darkness
I appear in light
I am not an angel
though I keep close to your side
The only voice Ive left
are the thoughts inside your mind
I'm a former lover
what becomes of goodbye

I am someones memory
trying to keep alive whatever we have left
Loving you from a distance
cause I don't wanna be someones regret
There isnt much left of us
but from where I stand,this is still love

I can't bring you heaven
I can't move the earth beneath your feet
Its hard to make you whole again
when I stand here incomplete
I'm somewhere between time and a memory
remembering how close we used to be
I want salvation beneath your wings again
I don't want a moment,I want eternity

 

 

 
 
 OFWGKTA (13)    (30 / F-M / Florida)
6-Nov-12 9:32 pm
Wow.....that's deep & very well written..... :(

 

 

 
 
 JtWhite 
6-Nov-12 9:37 pm
Thank you!

 

 

 
 
 OFWGKTA (13)    (30 / F-M / Florida)
6-Nov-12 9:43 pm
....You're welcome

 

 

 
 
 clover04 (10)    (52 / F-M / Texas)
6-Nov-12 9:52 pm
Thank you for sharing...

 

 

 
 
 JtWhite 
6-Nov-12 9:54 pm
Thank you for taking time to read!

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
6-Nov-12 10:10 pm
I loved this!!!

 

 

 
 
 braindroppings 
6-Nov-12 10:12 pm
This was very good!

 

 

 
 
 JtWhite 
6-Nov-12 10:27 pm
Thank you so much Jla and Brain!

 

 

 
 
 countrymusicgirl88 
17-Nov-12 5:27 pm
Love this!

 

 

 
 
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