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How do u feel about this unnamed poem (by horny32DDgirl)

10 votes
I love it
It was ok
Could put more to it
Well
 horny32DDgirl (0)  (35 / F-F / Victoria)
24-Jul-12 3:53 pm
Reply here for public feedback and private message me aswell
thankyou

 

 

 
 
 MrRamtasticAkaRam318 
24-Jul-12 3:55 pm
Um....where is the poem? :)

 

 

 
 
 horny32DDgirl (0)  (35 / F-F / Victoria)
24-Jul-12 3:57 pm
I dream of love
I live for lust
Smiling in the sun
While I squize me bust

Kissing ur lips happily
looking into ur eyes
I wonder if u love me
Sexually or intimately
Making me feel free

 

 

 
 
 JLaDawn 
24-Jul-12 3:58 pm
U forgot to give us the option to dislike it....jus saying

 

 

 
 
 horny32DDgirl (0)  (35 / F-F / Victoria)
24-Jul-12 4:00 pm
@JLaDawn: true...

 

 

 
 
 brats52005 (52)    (53 / F-M / California)
24-Jul-12 4:20 pm
I really dont care for it. It could use alot more to it.

 

 

 
 
 TrueLoveSeeker 
24-Jul-12 5:01 pm
A bit well!!! Not much.

 

 

 
 
 itz93kleezy 
24-Jul-12 5:26 pm
Sh*t i liked it...

keep doin wht yuhh doin gurl xD

dont let them h8'rz get to yuhh
if yuhh like it... thatz all it iz.. xD

 

 

 
 
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