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Kiss Me Before I Die? (by Rambler)

 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 11:49 pm
I get it. I screwed up again. I have hurt you yet another time.
It is my fault, of course. I tried to love you but only caused you pain.
I tried to protect you but only caused you injury. I thought I did the best I could, but I kept making you cry.
I don't know why I always hurt you. But I know I always do.
And now you stand above me with knife in hand. I won't ask you to spare my life, I know I deserve to die.
But would you grant me one request?
Kiss me before I die?

 

 

 
 
 rainbowchick32 
7-Jul-13 11:51 pm
Wow rambler another amazing poem

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 11:52 pm
@rainbowchick32: thank you

 

 

 
 
 Briteeyes 
7-Jul-13 11:53 pm
Aww beautiful

 

 

 
 
 RezaAhmed (-1)    (43 / M-F / Rajshahi)
7-Jul-13 11:56 pm
Last sentence is so much romantic nd heart able !!!

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 11:58 pm
@Briteeyes: thank you

 

 

 
 
 lace38 
7-Jul-13 11:58 pm
I love it

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 11:59 pm
@RezaAhmed: thanks

 

 

 
 
 Rambler 
7-Jul-13 11:59 pm
@lace38: glad you like it

 

 

 
 
 lace38 
8-Jul-13 12:02 am
@lace38: glad you like it
very much

 

 

 
 
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